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Dancing
           in
             the
                 dark

Flowing
           music
                   and
                        heart
                                beats

Can't
       you
            feel
                 the
                      love?
©2008-2009 ~RedNeck-BrattyCow
:iconredneck-brattycow:

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I'm a romantic at heart, I don't know why I keep trying to say otherwise!

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:iconkyronae:
Great job! I'm usually not a fan of haikus, but you wrote that very well. You painted a very vivid picture while still being succinct... and it wasn't about nature. Kudos. ;)
:iconredneck-brattycow:
Thanks! I really appreciate that. Haikus can just be pains to write!
:iconkyronae:
I know what you mean. I write poetry as well, but I usually avoid the shorter styles. It takes a lot of effort to be so abbreviated in thought, and I'm much too long winded. lol.

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